Rodborough Fields
in Space and Time
I like the way the
hidden springs gather force,
A wild winter rush
down the meadow side,
The wind singing in
the saplings’ rigging
On the water’s voyage
to the treasured Frome,
Thence on to the
Severn and the ocean.
One glance is enough
to enhance our lives,
And to make us feel a
part of it all,
Both spiritually and
globally,
Impossible thoughts
with pipes and culverts:
Diminished lives.
I like the way the
path of a low winter sun
Highlights the shadow
of ridge and furrow,
A medieval
landscape’s palimpsest;
I can see the ghost
of Piers Plowman,
His footprints fresh
in the frosted fields.
One glance is enough
to enhance our lives,
And to make us feel a
part of it all,
Spiritually and
historically,
Impossible thoughts with
bricks and mortar:
Diminished lives.
So why not build
homes on brownfield sites,
So that these new
families will also
Be able to feel a
part of it all,
Walking the fields
with undiminished lives,
Not listening to the
car radio,
Joni Mitchell’s “Big Yellow
Taxi”:
“Don’t it always seem
to go
That you don’t know
what you’ve got ‘til it’s gone,
They paved Paradise
and put up a parking lot.”
Excellent! I'm glad you've been inspired by Rodborough Fields, I myself am working on a poem for that fine meadow and also thankyou for stopping me in the street on saturday and giving this green piece of card!
ReplyDeleteThank you and please feel free to post your poem on this blog - the aim is for a collaborative approach. I have a meeting with Kel Portman of Walking the Land tomorrow and we will shortly have a website to keep things moving along a little more dynamically - details to follow.
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